For WM22

Wll it is defiantly an improvement from your before stuff. This art peice is a little unorganized, you might wanna think about placing backgrounds and such to tie it together and not just words floating there, which can give a peice a rather messy look. (like much of mine xD ) Though I will saythe just plain colors make some things look a little organized type it also makes it slightly duller, but keep going, and practicing. One other thing I noticed is you don't want to tell your viewers where to look, or focus, you should have things like overlapping, larger smaller and what not to create and form balance and to create a focal point which your viewer will automatically, look at, then flow through out the peice. If you have it organized and balanced.